[Artemisia] Artemisia] Is there really no one who can help?(Help needed - Latin translation)

[BENGTA1 at aol.com]

We have received no answers at all.  Any help would be welcome!
Bengta
In a message dated 7/28/2010 7:48:52 P.M. Mountain Daylight Time,  
BENGTA1 at aol.com writes:


Lady  Hawke ureally needs help translating to  Latin.  Here are two  
attempts.  She would really appreciate any   help.  Thank you,   Bengta

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This  is what the on line translator told  us:

1.    Bohun  fighter                  

Bohun proeliator

2.   where Bohun  goes on a  journey                 
qua Bohun goes in viaticus  

3.   Bohun receives a red belt from Ralph  Bigod.   
Bohun suscipio a rutilus belt ex  Ralph  Bigod.

4.  Here Bohun battles many in  victory      
Hic Bohun pugna plures in   victoria.

here Queen  Sati watches           

hic Regina  Sati vigilo

and here he slays the  great brine  shrimp               
quod hic is trucido everto sal salis   bestia / Monasteriense

here  the lady of  thorns       

hic era of  carduus


5.   here Duke Sean,  king, gave arms to Bohun the  Black     
hic Dux ducis Sean , rex rgis gave  telum ut  Bohun Niger


6.  . where Bohun  rides Dageny to victory in  the country  of..          
qua Bohun veho  Dageny ut victoria in rus  ruris  of..



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This  was done with a dictionary:




1.   Bohun  fighter

Bohun proeliator



2.   where Bohun goes on a journey
ubi Bohun proficisci  iter


3.   Bohun receives a red belt from Ralph  Bigod.
Bohun accipere rufus ab ne Ralph Bigod   comitis



4.  Here Bohun battles many in  victory  
hic Bohun pugnae  plurimi in victrix

here Queen  Sati  watches

hic Sati Regina  vigilo



and here  he slays the demon salt beast/monster (great brine  shrimp)
et hic  ipse interfectio bellua salsus  diabolus


here  the lady  of thorns 
his era de  spinae


5.  here Duke  Sean,  king, gave arms to Bohun the Black

hic Sean rex dedit Bohun  Ater  arma




6.  . where Bohun  rides Dageny  to victory in the country  of..
ubi Bohun equitant Dageni victoria in  terra  de


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