[Artemisia] Help needed - Latin translation

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Lady Hawke urgently needs help translating to  Latin.  Here are two 
attempts.  She would really appreciate any  help.  She hopes to be done with the 
embroidery by Aug 7!  Thank you,  Bengta
 
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This is what the on line translator told  us:
 
 1.   Bohun  fighter                                                        
        
Bohun proeliator
 
 2.   where Bohun goes on a  journey                            
qua Bohun goes in viaticus 
 
3.   Bohun receives a red belt from Ralph  Bigod.       
Bohun suscipio a rutilus belt ex  Ralph Bigod.
 
4.  Here Bohun battles many in  victory                                 
Hic Bohun pugna plures in  victoria.
 
here Queen  Sati watches                                                    
   
hic Regina  Sati vigilo
 
and here he slays the great brine  shrimp                     
quod hic is trucido everto sal salis  bestia / Monasteriense
 
here  the lady of  thorns                                                   
   
hic era of  carduus


5.  here Duke Sean,  king, gave arms to Bohun the  Black          
hic Dux ducis Sean , rex rgis gave  telum ut Bohun Niger
 
 
6.  . where Bohun  rides Dageny to victory in the country  of..          
qua Bohun veho Dageny ut victoria in rus  ruris of..
 


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This was done with a dictionary:
 
 
 
 
1.   Bohun fighter
 
Bohun proeliator

     
 
 2.   where Bohun goes on a journey
ubi Bohun proficisci iter
 
 
3.   Bohun receives a red belt from Ralph Bigod.
Bohun accipere rufus ab ne Ralph Bigod  comitis


 
4.  Here Bohun battles many in  victory 
hic Bohun pugnae  plurimi in victrix
    
here Queen Sati  watches
 
hic Sati Regina  vigilo

 
 
and here he slays the demon salt beast/monster (great brine  shrimp)
et hic ipse interfectio bellua salsus  diabolus
 
 
here  the lady of thorns 
his era de  spinae


5.  here Duke Sean,  king, gave arms to Bohun the Black
 
hic Sean rex dedit Bohun Ater  arma

 


6.  . where Bohun  rides Dageny to victory in the country  of..
ubi Bohun equitant Dageni victoria in terra de